Review of "Utumno"

[Echthelion]

Hi all,

Well, you have a very lengthy Chapter 1 of "The Search for Utumno." I await your comments regarding my "homage" to my favorite of the Tolkien books that I have yet read...and as always, none of this would've been possible without him.

Enjoy and thanks.

Ecthelion

[IronParrot]

Hey Ecthelion -

Generally, what we do in this forum is keep comments, feedback, etc. to the same thread where a story or excerpt is posted. It keeps the place tidy, and it's also easier for readers who want to quote specific passages verbatim when responding.

Those of you who haven't read the posted chapter yet, be sure to check it out here (http://entmoot.tolkientrail.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=9373).