Read and respond please!

[Legolas_Frodo_Aragorn]

Heres a poem i wrote...what do you guys think?

The words we once spoke
together in the dark
the room spinning all around us
and landing gently
3 small words
i love you
and we were off in a game
to far to go back
to close to see ahead
but if we could have
what would we have seen?
a road that curved sharpley
but doubled back
like we were trying once more
if we had seen, what would we have done
stopped while we were ahead
or let time take its toll
all i know is that in the future
i will never forget
never forget you
never forget you whispering those words
i love you

[Gwaimir Windgem]

Very nice, indeed. Quite well-written. :)

[Dreran the Green]

I like it.:)

[Lalaith_Elf]

*tearful*
you people are so talented!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

:D LOL i'm not kidding, it's nice

[Miranda]

Oh LFA that's goregous! I wish I could write poetry like that! I have a go but all I can manage are ballads most of the time. I can only ever right from my heart though- which seems to be the same for you, that poem really struck me as something you could only write from deep inside. Mx

[IronParrot]

Write it out in curvy pink letters, and you've got yourself one pretty, heartfelt greeting card. :p

[Legolas_Frodo_Aragorn]

thanks you guys!:D Ill post some others when i write them....i have a really good one but i handed it in for a project so im waiting for it to come back.....

I anyone else wants to post poems so other people can respond to them.....id be happy to respond

[Linaewen]

Very good. I like it a lot. I can almost forgive your having my love in your avatar.

[Hans Moleman]

The words personified an underlaying felling of true love, is that where you got your inspiration?

[Valaróma]

That is really good!! :D I would post some of my poems but I belive the site is a PG-13 so I can't post my favourites.
I will post a couple ones that I can later on ;) Be warned they are really bad!

That poem is really really good though!
Congrats!

[Fimbrethil]

I wish I could write something like that my peoms are mostly funny or descriptive of whats going on around me or what things look like.

[Arat-Falathion]

Ah, that is one nice poem :)

Here is one that totaly struck my heart (not written by me)

Ice Dragon (http://www.everquest-2.com/phpbb/viewtopic.php?t=922)