Would you read this story?

[Mihara of Yeldar]

Just wanna do a little back checking before I finish writing to see if it's worth my time...
In a time and world far from ours, the forces of evil are only kept from destroying the world by a powerful but tiny sect of magi known as they Shadow. But the Shadow are dying, and the chosen one prophised to lead them through the storm is a half-blood child raised in the darkness...
Okay, to be blunt, the story is about a mixed blood elf named Mihara from the Kingdom of Yeldar who is supposed to save the Shadow (red) magi and in turn the world. But she is an outcast among her own people, and the leader of the Evil knows her face and weaknesses.
Just wanna know, would anyone read it?

[Arat-Falathion]

It sounds interensting... I just might read it, yes :)

[Bhaal Iyaden]

Sounds great!:D

[Tessar]

sounds interesting.

btu if I were you I wouldent call them "shadow" magi. makes them sound evil.

[Araethirion]

Sure!!! Sounds great, and they're called "Shadow" Magi ^_^ I love Shadows... in fact, 'Araethirion' means 'Shadow Eater'

[Mihara of Yeldar]

Originally posted by Tesseract12
btu if I were you I wouldent call them "shadow" magi. makes them sound evil. [/B]

I'm calling them Shadow Magi because shadow is right in the middle of dark and light, and keeping the peace between darkness and light is their enitire purpose.

[RosieCotton]

What a creative idea! I'd love to read it. What the title?
~Rosie~

[Carafin]

That does sound interesting!!!:)

[Laredith]

It sounds great! I love books of that kind...alas! One more book in my "must read some time" list, and this one I can't read!

[katya]

this sounds like a great book. i would read it. i like the shadow name too. especially now that i know what it means. sweet!

[Blackboar]

You bet I would read it!
Sounds great!:D :D :D :D :D :D

[Helix]

Sounds kind of like Terry Brooks's "Elfstones of Shannara," which I'm about 100 pages into. It's an excellent plot, but Brooks isn't an outstanding author (he's not bad, and I've only read 2 of his other books, but he's not stellar).

[eowyngirl14]

This book sounds really interesting. I would definetly read it. I love the shadow, half way between good and evil, light and dark idea! Are you going to write this story and try to publish it? I really hope you do, it sounds great!:) :D ;) :p :cool:

[Adrian Baggins]

Sounds really great. you might think about making a serise about the girl Mihara and calling it OUTCAST and have this be the first boor called OUTCAST Mihara and the Shadows.