I Wrote a Fanfic! ^^

[Gulio, Strength of Many]

Yes, it has finally happened! Anywho, I want to know what you guys think. Bring on the (hopefully constructive) criticism! ^^

Here's the link, since I don't want to have a post that stretches on into eternity... ^^

My Fanfic! (http://www.fanfiction.net/~moofinqueen)

[Gulio, Strength of Many]

-sigh- No one cares about poor Gulio and her ickle fanfic. Thanks for crushing my hopes and dreams, guys! ;)

[elixir]

That link didn't work for me before. It however does work now.

Anyway, I read your story, but I'm not very good at criticising... so I'll just say that I liked it and would like to read more of that theme. :) :D :)

Maybe someone else can help you out with constructive criticism... ;)

[Rosie Gamgee]

Interesting. Very funny, at any rate. I can't wait until you get to "A diversion." Captain Obvious indeed.
btw, you are hilarious in text- "I ish da Queen..." Funny.