Pirate
06-27-2004, 09:11 PM
I've been throwing this new story idea for a while now and I've finally put it down but I still don't know wether I like it or not. It would be really nice if you could read it and tell me whether I should go on or not or give me some contructive criticism. As a warning, the story's very rated R because of language and drug use. Thanks so much. Spiders (http://www.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=1528494)