Rune Lore

[Tessar]

Well since Arat was so kind as to read it and give me some criticism on it, I decided to go ahead and make a post devoted to my newest story, Rune Lore.

Rune Lore (http://www.freewebs.com/runelore)

I'm just going to be putting it up on the website, and I'm not particularly looking for criticism, but if you want to give me some I certainly wouldn't mind having it :).

I'll put a little post here every time I update it (or at least every now and then).

Right now I have four chapters up, and the plot line has just 'started'.

[Arat-Falathion]

Was a nice read thus far indeed ;)

[Arcala]

I just finished reading your story, and I liked it very much. You've got some...er....grammatical problems (ie. comma use, using "loose" instead of "lose" , etc.) Good story. I hope you will continue writing!

[Earniel]

Nice story! :)

One tiny remark: I've noticed you used 'Jannin forest' in the second chapter and 'Danin forest' in the third, but I got the impression they're supposed to be one and the same wood.